Lately, I have realized that adding a description to your piece helps in enhancing the meaning of it. Provided, it is added in apt manner. Not stretching this realization further I would just like to add that this one is for all the wars and violence going around the world. Only in few nations, fellows mates are sleeping without the terror of not waking up the next morning. We, as a one, need to untie and realize that its high time to stop all of this madness and rage....This is just a small effort but i hope it adds.
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REDEEM...
And who will you serve when death stands upright?
Burning homes and thundering cannons outside.
Only blood flowing down your heart and mind.
Roaring beast of anger will feast upon the flesh of his and your child.
Our poor lord! redeem our souls,
For we destroyed that, which you build strong but is unwilling to restore.
We don’t seek light, we don’t seek insight.
We just desire to hoard too many pieces of gold and dime.
Save us all and let us explore the love which binds.
Look down on us,
we fools!... We weak!...
We don’t play by the rules, only macabre to rule.
And our unbesmirched pride is not enough to fight the doom that thrive
This is a plead to bring back the time, without fear and fight.
