The inherent thought behind this poem is "Who are you without your name?"
Mango, the grandiose apparel,
blue shirt, suede stilettos, even the brown barrel.
Take away the brand name, out goes the love collar,
out goes the brown barrel, out goes the dollar.
Hath Satan no course,
bereft of the diabolic discourse.
What's in a name?, thou say,
the thought got a four-word name, I pray.
Anonymous, much rather, thou say,
that's too a given name, I pray.
It still smells sweet, need no name,
there's still appreciation, need no fame,
but then what does the ardent lover claim?
Sweep will the waltzing wind,
leaving all reminiscences skinned.
Address beseeches you to address,
anonymity haunts until your name you caress.
- SAMEEKSHA KHARE
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You've always been amazing at this.
Keep up the good work, double thumbs up ! :)
Keep up the good work, double thumbs up ! :)
September 20th, 2012
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Thank you so much everyone, your appreciation means a lot. :)
September 21st, 2012
The expressions used in the poem are beautiful. And the way it has been shaped written is captivating.
Good Luck Sameeksha!
Good Luck Sameeksha!
September 22nd, 2012
Really a great poem a thought provoking lines.. A huge round of applause.. Sameeksha.. U have done a very good work.. Keep it up !!
September 22nd, 2012
Beautifully crafted and meticulously written.Deep thoughts are precarious to handle but you have done it very well.
Well done sameeksha..keep going
Well done sameeksha..keep going
September 23rd, 2012
Very beautiful! It has everything I look for in a poem - a pleasing arrangement, evokes emotions and thoughts and makes me look up a dictionary to learn a couple of new words !!
September 23rd, 2012
man....this is AWSM ...just luv it.Never knew you were soooo good at this :))
September 23rd, 2012
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Thanks a lot everyone!
September 28th, 2012
Hope i will b able to see more from you..