I know you are not mine,
But my heart is crossing every line.
Every limit is being broken,
Yet my love remains silent, unspoken.
Something compels me to shout out that I love you.
Maybe it sounds selfish on my part.
But it's almost a necessity now.
I tend to proclaim and declare.
Something is shrieking inside,
Something is screeching inside.
Something is burning inside.
Something is sobbing inside,
Something is waiting inside.
Why does my heart-beat start racing when I hear your name?
Something on my inside,
Is preparing for the ultimate journey,
And the ultimate collapse.
Can you hear me? I love you.
I wanna shout out that I love you.
But particularly enough, I wanna tell you;
How much I love you...
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- ASTHA KHARE
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AANYA VERMA
3ed this poem of yours astha..
January 4th, 2013
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Thanks a lot aanya :)
January 4th, 2013
This piece of writing depicts an agony which is largely inspired by restlessness. I just love the formation and structure of the poem. The concept is cliché but the formation is compelling. Though the line,
'Can you hear me? I love you'
should have come last. It would have given a dramatic air and end to this nice piece of poetry! Good Job!
'Can you hear me? I love you'
should have come last. It would have given a dramatic air and end to this nice piece of poetry! Good Job!
January 5th, 2013