A wish,
To make a change,
To make a difference,
To 'heal the world',
To see a better tomorrow,
To plant a tree,
To do something for the poor,
To lend a helping hand,
To stand beside every Man,
To stop injustice done to man,
To stand up for humanity,
To love every human,
To fight for existence,
To be someone,
To succeed in life,
To get pardon for the mistakes I have done,
To be always a God's son,
To live a life full of fun,
To live forever,
It is my wish to be a true human.
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Criticisms are welcome.
June 20th, 2013
nice poetry ...
Critic comment: could have been better with a little bit of subtle rhyming ....
I give ok!!
keep writing ... :)
Critic comment: could have been better with a little bit of subtle rhyming ....
I give ok!!
keep writing ... :)
June 21st, 2013