Nice Nice Nice he clicks
never says a word
clicking finger sticking out
flashing like a sword
Sword the clicks when cuts deep
tears the words apart
Silent stories, sweet peoms
dejected they depart
Pointer constant with aims high
to make a name for self
Come midnight on writerbabu
hiding his real self
Hummer bee earlier he
graduates to being nice
Escapades with people's work
make them pay a price
Price of gloom the next morn
face reflects itself
He that polls on all my stuff
back to back, i yelp.
Ok dude, if you come
it's cool what you must think
Take some time and comment on the work
stay for more than a blink.
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SRIJAN SRIVASTAVA
true .. :P
May 7th, 2014
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May 7th, 2014
Nice is not at all bad. Earlier it was humm.
But really, nice is NOT bad.
Imagine getting 10 humms all together at once.
But really, nice is NOT bad.
Imagine getting 10 humms all together at once.
May 7th, 2014
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Now Humm doesn't give any points. So he has graduated to Nice.
Sly ! : P
Sly ! : P
May 7th, 2014
I don't think points was anyway the purpose. How is the other person getting benefit if it adds up to your post?
May 8th, 2014
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Well, anyhow he/she gave me a nice topic .... so no complaints : )
May 8th, 2014