जब अपने हाथों में मैंने नाम आपका सजाया था,
हवा का कोई एक झोंका तो मेरी खुश्बू लेकर आया ही होगा
जब आपकी याद मे अश्कों ने मेरे काजल को मिटा दिया,
आँसू की एक बूँद ने तो आपकी पलकों को भी भिंगोया हीं होगा
जब आपको देखे बिना मेरे दिल की धड़कनें थमने सी लगीं थी
मुझपे तरस खा कर तो खुदा ने आपके सपनों में मेरा चेहरा दिखाया हीं होगा,
जब आपकी खुशी को मैंने अपने जीने की वजह बना ली,
मेरी मुस्कान मुझे लौटाने का एक ख़याल तो आपको आया हीं होगा
जब दुनिया के डर से आपकी बाहों में सिमटना चाहती थी मैं,
मुझे प्यार से गले लगाने को तो जी आपका भी ललचाया ही होगा
जब मैंने आपको अपनी ज़िंदगी से जोड़ा, आपको अपना सब कुछ माना
आपकी हर जन्म की संगिनी हूँ मैं, ये तो आपको समझ में आया हीं होगा..
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GAMBLERSIDH TANEJA
pta ni tha k ladkiyo ko b aise pyar hota h..... hats off
May 27th, 2013
Girls are more mature and emotional when it comes to love, Gamblersidh.
@Akanksha, it was a really beautiful piece. :)
@Akanksha, it was a really beautiful piece. :)
May 27th, 2013
@riya motalma pyar samajhne k liye dil chahiye hota h, maturity nahi...
May 27th, 2013
pyar kisi ki jagir nahi hoti k ladke karein ya ladkiyan.. aur kaun kitna kar sakta hai iski koi limit ya extent nahi hoti.. ayways its not a topic of debate.. har doosre ko lagta hai k jaisa wo pyar kar sakta hai waisa koi aur nahi kar sakta but sachhai ye hai.. har koi kisi na kisi se aisa pyar karta hai jitna wo kisi aur se nahi kar sakta... :)
May 27th, 2013
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@riya and @aanya thanks a lot.. i m flattered...
May 28th, 2013
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@Gamblersidh if my poem affected ur thoughts i must have created something worthwhile..
May 28th, 2013
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@rukshita.. jaanu tumhare mein hi sochte sochte likha hai..
May 28th, 2013
@gambersidh, both are required. if ur not mature, you won't even understand the love you fall in and are most likely to forget about it. on the other hand, you cant fall in love if u dnt have a heart.
May 28th, 2013
@akansha.. yes u cn say that but to b honest it is impossible to find the love that u have explained in ur poem..... not matter how much u love someone, the only thing matter is whether that someone loves u or not n if u ignore this then only thing left with u r tears forever...
@riya.... i agree with u but log itne b mature kyu ho jate h k duniyadaari k liye pyar ko hi bhul jate h
@riya.... i agree with u but log itne b mature kyu ho jate h k duniyadaari k liye pyar ko hi bhul jate h
May 28th, 2013
Well this is probably the first hindi piece I have read here and is absolutely awesome, SPEECHLESS!!!
P.S- I have become more liberal with the polls now :P
P.S- I have become more liberal with the polls now :P
May 28th, 2013
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@sam thanx a lot :)
May 29th, 2013
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@gamblersidh i found that love.. i feel that love.. that is how this poem came to my mind.. true luv still exists
May 29th, 2013
jab lafzon se pyaar ki itni chaashni tapakti ho,
toh mohabbat ne woh do pal dikhaya hi hoga...
ise aap bayaan karo ya hum bayaan kare,
har pal zindagi ne uss mohabbat ka karz toh chukaya hi hoga...
aafreen...:)
toh mohabbat ne woh do pal dikhaya hi hoga...
ise aap bayaan karo ya hum bayaan kare,
har pal zindagi ne uss mohabbat ka karz toh chukaya hi hoga...
aafreen...:)
May 31st, 2013
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@sufi u alwys render me speechless as usual
May 31st, 2013
i remember the first time you should me your poems when we were in class 10th, your writing has became more beautiful and improved ever since then.
July 4th, 2013
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Thanx Akanksha.. For reading my first poems (or rhymes !!!)
July 7th, 2013